{"id":255,"date":"2010-01-11T16:10:37","date_gmt":"2010-01-12T00:10:37","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/suenelsonbuckley.ca\/blog\/?p=255"},"modified":"2010-01-11T16:10:37","modified_gmt":"2010-01-12T00:10:37","slug":"the-making-of-jake-pt-3","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/suenelsonbuckley.ca\/blog\/2010\/01\/11\/the-making-of-jake-pt-3\/","title":{"rendered":"The Making of Jake – pt 3"},"content":{"rendered":"

What I\u2019ve learned along the way<\/strong> <\/p>\n

It\u2019s been twenty years since I started writing the story about Jake and Kathryn. A lot has changed. Even if your rewrite is only a few months after the initial writing, check it to make sure your details are still current if your story is set in today’s world.<\/p>\n

When I started the re-write in 2007, I had to adjust all sorts of things in my story. <\/p>\n

Kathryn no longer needed to look up the number in the phone book to the Bed & Breakfast, instead she found the website on her laptop. On the wharf, I had to make it logical that she couldn\u2019t just whip out her cell phone. It would have ruined the foundation scene for the entire story, so I had to come up with a reason for her cell to be shut off and thrown into the back seat of her car.<\/p>\n

Reference points change quickly. Keep them vague if you can. Avoid mentioning models for electronics and specific television shows. Be extra careful if you\u2019re using current celebrities. Three months ago it would have been fine for your hero to want to be just like Tiger Woods, he seemed infallible – umm yeah, now not so much.<\/p>\n

Don\u2019t stop writing. This is perhaps the most important and hardest thing to do. <\/strong><\/p>\n

We\u2019re all our own worst critics. Seriously, real editors have nothing on us. And what\u2019s even worse, if we are lucky enough to receive real feedback, it\u2019s our own lack of confidence that interprets the comments to suit our perspective instead of allowing us to take the suggestions at face value. When I received my first rejection, it included a handwritten note saying my characters were wooden. <\/p>\n

I was crushed. I put my manuscript and my dreams of becoming a writer up on a shelf and sulked. I gave up. Every time I\u2019d catch myself writing little story starters or jot down ideas I\u2019d stop. My inner editor was constantly berating me \u2013 who do you think you\u2019re kidding? You can\u2019t write.<\/p>\n

It wasn\u2019t until a few years later that my Mom was speaking to Dorothy Dearborn<\/a>, a popular local author in Saint John. When Mom told her about my rejection, Dorothy wasted no time in correcting my assumption. Thanks Dorothy! Even if it\u2019s just a scribbled comment on the side of a form letter, it means the editor not only read your work (which often they don\u2019t) but they saw enough merit in it, to take the time and make a suggestion. <\/p>\n

For those of you who are just starting out, there are three basic types of rejections.<\/strong><\/p>\n

The form letter \u2013 we cannot accept your work at this time, blah, blah, blah. Chances are, your work was not suitable for their target audience or had serious flaws to correct. <\/p>\n

The form letter with comment \u2013 you\u2019re moving up the food chain. They read your work and saw potential and made a few comments to steer you in the right direction.<\/p>\n

The actual letter \u2013 addressed to you without any hint of form-y-ness to it at all. This means re-write your dang manuscript as soon as you can and resubmit it. Unless, the letter indicates that your work is not suitable for their audience. If that\u2019s the case, find a publisher who has the right audience. These rejection letters are golden. I\u2019m tempted to frame mine. <\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

It\u2019s been twenty years since I started writing the story about Jake and Kathryn. A lot has changed in my life and life in general. Even if your rewrite is only a few months after the initial writing, check it for current details. No matter what happens, don\u2019t stop writing. This is perhaps the most important and hardest thing to do<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[52,53,6],"class_list":["post-255","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-randommusings","tag-dorothy-dearborn","tag-rejections","tag-writing"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/suenelsonbuckley.ca\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/255","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/suenelsonbuckley.ca\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/suenelsonbuckley.ca\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/suenelsonbuckley.ca\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/suenelsonbuckley.ca\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=255"}],"version-history":[{"count":16,"href":"https:\/\/suenelsonbuckley.ca\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/255\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":271,"href":"https:\/\/suenelsonbuckley.ca\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/255\/revisions\/271"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/suenelsonbuckley.ca\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=255"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/suenelsonbuckley.ca\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=255"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/suenelsonbuckley.ca\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=255"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}